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Lois Thomson Bowersock's avatar

Wonderful, magical poem. You have captured the essence of Christmas. A nice poem to read at bedtime with the younger grandkids.

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Rod Bluhm's avatar

Thanks, Lois!

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Birgit Solvsten D'Alpoim's avatar

❤️❤️❤️🌲

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Birgit Solvsten D'Alpoim's avatar

Mom's usually bring more than their fair share. Just saying.

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Rod Bluhm's avatar

That’s for sure.

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Kristin Bluhm's avatar

Nice seasonal expression. You could re-write and have Mrs Claus / Mom doing what she does. 🤣

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Rod Bluhm's avatar

I was leaving that door open for you. 😊

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Aaron Waddell's avatar

Joyful!

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Rod Bluhm's avatar

Thanks, Aaron, and I appreciate the restack!

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Lovely festive poem! That's a nice twist that it turns out to be about a dad who just wants to give his kids a nice Christmas... 🎄😎🎄

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Rod Bluhm's avatar

Thanks, Chris! That twist could very well be a tip of the cap to you. Thanks for sharing this!

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

You're very welcome! And that is much appreciated. Twists are definitely one of my favourite plot devices to use, for sure, and I try to squeeze one in whenever I can. Haha... 😎

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Francesca Bossert's avatar

Well done! And how fun to write a Father Christmas/ Saint Nick / Santa Claus poem.

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Rod Bluhm's avatar

Thank you, Francesca!

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B Stings's avatar

"He wants to bring cheer" As righteous an aim as any

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Rod Bluhm's avatar

Amen, B. Thanks for sharing this.

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Mary Pierce's avatar

Love this, Rod. Thank God for those hard-working dads.

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Rod Bluhm's avatar

Thanks, Mary!

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